Quicksand
My friend is in pain.
Sitting across from me, I let her talk and watch
Tears slipping down her cheek, pricking my heart like a thorn.
Her pain is palpable, permeating the air,
Making me gasp for breath.
She is so young and I am so old.
Wisdom should come with age but it doesn’t.
I want to ease her hurt but stumble,
Offering words that sink like stones tossed in a pool.
And her tears overflow.
I have been there in this place she finds herself.
It is dark and dank, full of quicksand
Sucking, pulling, threatening to drown her.
I could tell her not to resist, yet remember how hard it is
To surrender, how unforgiving that feels.
My heart aches as I listen.
I found my way out so why can’t I help her?
I hug her and say “hang in there”, disgusted
That this is the best I can do.
She hugs me back and says “I know what you mean.”
Comment by Sally
Posted on December 31, 2009 at 3:38 pm
Very heart felt and deeply reflective poem.
Sally
(from writer’s digest community)
Comment by owner
Posted on January 1, 2010 at 10:50 am
thank you Sally for your kind comments.